Critique "Man With Two Souls"

“The Man with Two Souls” tells the story of an amnesiac that gathers a few clues about his identity, but doesn’t fully regain his life by the end of the story. There’s some very colorful language in this story, particularly during the sex scenes. Sex in literature is very unstable ground to tread on, especially without an explicit build toward the sexual climax. I wonder if the sex would work better at the end of the story, and rather than giving the reader such intense images to digest early on, leave them with those images.